User:CampbellParsons/Apple Arcade
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CAMPBELL: You've done a good job of selecting a topic, beginning to draft information and sources, and completing the required training modules and sandboxes. My major suggestion is to ensure you format your bibliography to Wiki format and to also develop proper paragraph and sentences rather then bullet points where possible. I also encourage you to add a relevant image! Nice start here! - Professor Robinson
In this wikipedia article, I added to existing sections and also made new ones. The original page had a section for features but I felt was missing a lot of content. There were only four points prior. I added a sections for rumours and general news that the public knew about before the original release. I also added a section for controllers. Apple Arcade allows users to play on different console controllers rather than using the devices touch screen. The explanation below is based on the original wiki page although I changed it slightly. Thy key features I feel are better represented through bullet points as the original is also in bullet point. I did however want to take you advice and try to avoid points where I can which is why I made the other sections into written sentences.
Apple Arcade is a video game subscription service by Apple Inc. for iOS, iPadOS, tvOS, and macOS devices. It includes games that are exclusive to Apple Arcade and Apple devices. It was announced in March 2019, and launched on September 19, 2019.